NRD Phase 3: Polishing a nrd

work in progress website screenshot
work in progress website screenshot- start of day

Critique from the Fadiman (web teacher): “More white space, especially between elements vertically and in terms of line height. Elements in header are crowded and unharmonious. More padding in those boxes around your headlines. I think inclusion of a younger, edgier font. Advertising needs to be integrated, not marginalized to the right column. Content and structure are great, but needs more social.”

yslow plugin screenshot
This is what happens when you don’t pay attention to how big your photos are.
screenshot of website version1
screenshot of what I offered up for critique today


I like the idea of a physical interface look, but this isn’t styled enough. I have a lot to do. I don’t think I understand the brand’s aesthetic. I am going to consult my style tiles again and figure out what I need to do to make this website what I want it to be.

Katsite Project 2

(Earlier Post Relating to This Project)


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