Critique from the Fadiman (web teacher): “More white space, especially between elements vertically and in terms of line height. Elements in header are crowded and unharmonious. More padding in those boxes around your headlines. I think inclusion of a younger, edgier font. Advertising needs to be integrated, not marginalized to the right column. Content and structure are great, but needs more social.”
I like the idea of a physical interface look, but this isn’t styled enough. I have a lot to do. I don’t think I understand the brand’s aesthetic. I am going to consult my style tiles again and figure out what I need to do to make this website what I want it to be.