Ravenna Gardens: Phase 2/ Critique and Rebuild

Ravenna Gardens website screenshot desktop

Katsite Project 1
Today’s critique <nutshell> Built fine, bad design. </nutshell>

Erik Fadiman said that it was boxy, the typography needs work, and use the empty space in the second column. I’m throwing away that style sheet and building a new one. One using something modified by Fadiman, roughly based on the grid at 1140px. And I’m throwing away my crappy google fonts. And I’m now using Adobe Edge Fonts. Which is surprisingly so badly designed that there is a helper Adobe Edge Fonts that allows you to see the different fonts in action.

(Earlier Post Relating to This Project)

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About KC

I am Katarina Countiss, a multimedia designer. I like blogs, games, art and technology. I am curious about how things are made.
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